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« Thread Started on Jul 9, 2007, 4:59pm »


GMT + 2
Europe
Hungary
Budapest
47 30 00 N
019 03 00 E
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BUDAPEST
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Uroborus yawns its teeth from its tail
and the Gods shake their heads and
contemplate the quicks of
their presumably manicured fingernails.
.
A phenomenon usually equated
with divine intervention shows itself to me
as a conversation two people may have on the subway.
(First one in the world you know. Rubber wheels…)
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Relationship problems and grocery lists
in the land of archangels and commandments.
Cardboard. Veneer.
6 foot under the Id.
However many feet under the layers of the city I am,
I smell a rat, not a minotaur.
(Oldest labyrinth in the world you know…)
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A plot cooked up to fill the cavernous spaces
our egos require us to fill:
TV. Porno. Video games. Gossip.
Drugs and booze. Church and Jesus.
Travel.
(Call it’cher mamma for all I care.)
.
These questions, these holes, they will be filled.
As these shafts will collapse under the weight of the European Union one day.
I contend it will be invited.
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Don’t worry about that just yet.
You and your shin splints will have lots of time to think it over,
and to ponder
why they even bother with refrigerators in Hungary,
most of them seem to sputter a shy sight short of properly.
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« Reply #1 on Nov 21, 2007, 9:32pm »

G'day!
Been reading all your stuff and enjoying it. What better way to spend an evening in the Port while the wind howls and the moisture bargains with that wind to be either rain or snow.
Wondering why you chose to avoid some places, like the Dam or Karamea. Or, perhaps it is yet come as you glean worthwhile prose from your time spent there. Keep it coming!! Great reading for the old guy! See ya in the dead of Canadian winter! Geez, I'm hating it already.
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« Reply #2 on Nov 22, 2007, 11:52pm »

hey Dave, how is the travelling poet doing? I liked this, up she goes
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« Reply #3 on Feb 14, 2008, 5:29pm »

hmh, "the travelling poet", is that how they call you? ^^
if pieces like this are created on your trips then I support them :P this was thought-provoking & inspiring to me...
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Darkness crawls up my pillars
And my mind is
Drip
drip
dripping

Into a dirty puddle of thoughts
Where I have learned to accept my pain
And tell it to wait outside
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« Reply #4 on Feb 17, 2008, 3:18am »

yup, all those baddies are from first hand misconceptions on my part. now all i have to do is find someone to fund these excursions....
i'm in varanasi, india at the moment, so we'll see what comes out of this place...surely it will be more than nothing. glad you liked it and thanks for the comments.
prost!
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