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Post by Ivan Carswell on Oct 19, 2007 21:15:11 GMT -5
Thieves of light those words an agony absorbing gentle energies, a silence destitute.
I heard the sigh before the light went out. My ears denied the death I heard; the past
had died, is passed and gone into the night. Dear heart you said, and I had loved you too. © 2 June 2007, I.D. Carswell
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Post by Don Schaeffer on Oct 19, 2007 23:08:23 GMT -5
mourning songs--very sad.
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Post by John Yamrus on Oct 25, 2007 8:00:07 GMT -5
Ivan; i started out not liking this one because of the quirky punctuation...but by the end i was right there with you. well said. john
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