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Post by Ivan Carswell on Mar 29, 2009 21:47:18 GMT -5
folding yesterday’s washing at 3am may not convey the right sentiment; I need sleep, tiredness intervenes but I am captive to the neatness you always expressed
tidy piles rest on the side of the bed you left vacant to rediscover joy in your life – a life which I now know lost its gracious way with untold love in every fold © 22 November 2008, I. D. Carswell
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Post by scriptamanent on Mar 30, 2009 4:40:28 GMT -5
this is super!
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Post by Dunstan Attard on Mar 31, 2009 4:39:20 GMT -5
so very limpid with all images leading cleanly to the soul...excellent poetry
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Post by sarahcabrera on Mar 31, 2009 12:37:13 GMT -5
This is so good. 1st reading: I sighed & swooned. 2nd reading: broke my heart a bit.
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