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Groomed
Sept 8, 2009 5:10:20 GMT -5
Post by Ivan Carswell on Sept 8, 2009 5:10:20 GMT -5
pony clubbers out in force that afternoon – two mothers three girls and a guy prepared horses talking of whom was seeing whom; although unsaid the cool word was she doesn’t hang out with them
ponies groomed with meticulous care belched pleasure into their buckets of oats painting rare sheens on lips as yet unkissed but ready to be – glossed over with the sheer animal moment’s delight in the imagined ride © 5 September 2009, I. D. Carswell
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pony clubbers out in force that afternoon – two mothers three girls and a guy prepared horses talking of whom was seeing whom; although unsaid the cool word was she doesn’t hang out with them
ponies groomed with meticulous care belched pleasure into their buckets of oats painting rare sheens on lips as yet unkissed but ready to be – glossed over with the sheer animal moment’s delight
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Groomed
Sept 9, 2009 18:26:47 GMT -5
Post by leecrowell on Sept 9, 2009 18:26:47 GMT -5
let's form a line at the feeding trough and turn this into a real party Ivan has struck gold!
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Groomed
Sept 10, 2009 3:35:49 GMT -5
Post by Ivan Carswell on Sept 10, 2009 3:35:49 GMT -5
You gotta queue Lee, they claim to have rules...!
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Groomed
Sept 10, 2009 22:36:59 GMT -5
Post by Bernard Alain on Sept 10, 2009 22:36:59 GMT -5
like this Ivsn, I think it needs a boost (to the gallery)--- small nit, I'd nuke 'in the imagined ride ', the ride is imagined at this point, regardless, up she-e-e goes ...
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