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Post by Don Schaeffer on Feb 3, 2010 10:07:16 GMT -5
These are not just challenges of new skill calm mind going beyond instruction, trying new tricks, these are trips into beyond. These are final emptyings from which there would be no time to escape. These dredge up forgotten strings of turmoil which we simulated only in games.
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Post by leecrowell on Feb 5, 2010 22:00:11 GMT -5
seemingly devoid of optimism but you still perceive it as a challenge, and that leaves a faint glimmer of hope
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Post by scriptamanent on Feb 6, 2010 2:58:39 GMT -5
I agree with leecrowell. Very well written poem.
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Post by Don Schaeffer on Feb 6, 2010 18:33:07 GMT -5
Thanks Lee an Nicoletta. The challenges that are so earth shaking have to do with giving old secure living to find new happiness. So far its working.
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