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Feb 25, 2010 17:24:02 GMT -5
Post by scriptamanent on Feb 25, 2010 17:24:02 GMT -5
It’s a relief to love Your dog more than Thy neighbours. She sleeps, one ear infected
-I wish she hadn’t followed that bear, those pathways are full of demons
And earthquakes. And many ‘sooner or laters’ -
Now I wow at the fact Only mites can hurt such a dog. Pity I can’t envy her;
I still overestimate myself.
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Feb 26, 2010 8:13:28 GMT -5
Post by Don Schaeffer on Feb 26, 2010 8:13:28 GMT -5
Excellent witty charming piece.
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Feb 26, 2010 20:13:55 GMT -5
Post by Ivan Carswell on Feb 26, 2010 20:13:55 GMT -5
Nice balance Nicoletta, it rides the edge with insouciant wit
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Feb 27, 2010 4:42:23 GMT -5
Post by scriptamanent on Feb 27, 2010 4:42:23 GMT -5
thanks!
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Feb 27, 2010 15:48:52 GMT -5
Post by Dunstan Attard on Feb 27, 2010 15:48:52 GMT -5
yes indeed...juxtaposes images and sensations with creative poise...
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Feb 28, 2010 0:32:09 GMT -5
Post by inchiki on Feb 28, 2010 0:32:09 GMT -5
i like the shape of it - two small verses wrapped around a long line. is there a name for that form?
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Mar 12, 2010 8:40:19 GMT -5
Post by scriptamanent on Mar 12, 2010 8:40:19 GMT -5
thank you very much
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