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Jul 8, 2010 23:19:50 GMT -5
Post by Ivan Carswell on Jul 8, 2010 23:19:50 GMT -5
Said I’d get back to it a wringing wet sop of a book which even plagiarised itself attempting originality
didn’t make it though – too much respect for the dead left no room to shake starving fleas from its mane
been bitten by contemplation estranged of origins – victims of self deceit chasing shadows shouting extravagant names ©9 July 2010, I. D. Carswell
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Jul 9, 2010 7:48:06 GMT -5
Post by Don Schaeffer on Jul 9, 2010 7:48:06 GMT -5
ooh come on it probably wasn't that bad. Enjoyed this poem. A writer's poem.
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Jul 9, 2010 22:54:01 GMT -5
Post by Ivan Carswell on Jul 9, 2010 22:54:01 GMT -5
Thanks Don, and I wont attempt to prosecute it any further!
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Jul 10, 2010 22:55:46 GMT -5
Post by leecrowell on Jul 10, 2010 22:55:46 GMT -5
I follow you with this Ivan, very heartily
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Jul 11, 2010 15:08:46 GMT -5
Post by Bernard Alain on Jul 11, 2010 15:08:46 GMT -5
... everyone's a crit eh, Ivan this was a super read ...glad don boosted it first
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