Munia
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Post by Munia on Feb 18, 2011 7:50:54 GMT -5
“Unsent Letter”
This is a poetry form invented by Marion Friedenthal and named 'Dectina Refrain' by Luke Prater .Form is 1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8/9 syllables and then the first 4 lines repeated in a stand-alone 10th line.
And Right here Waving thoughts Mingle with words Inscrutable lines Written on torn pages Blurry, broken and untrue In dusky dreams to haunt the mind That longs to reach this unsent letter And right here waving thoughts mingle with words
Written on the night of the 15th of February,2011
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Post by Don Schaeffer on Feb 18, 2011 8:40:15 GMT -5
Welcome. Interesting piece.
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Post by Dunstan Attard on Feb 18, 2011 11:01:50 GMT -5
enjoyed reading, interesting construction that does not diminish expression.
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Post by leecrowell on Feb 19, 2011 13:40:08 GMT -5
Marion Friedenthal had some time on her hands. You've taken a form and worked nicely through it.
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Post by Munia on Aug 14, 2012 6:49:34 GMT -5
Thank you so much Don, Danstan and leecrowell for your precious critiques on my poem.Apologies for my very, very late reply.I lost my access to this site.After such a long time I have managed to join the club.Thanks very much for your kindest reviews.
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