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Post by Don Schaeffer on Aug 27, 2011 11:56:37 GMT -5
A poem is not a poem unless it whines, mines the shiny sour candies from the tragic clowns' pickle underground.
pickle sellers' word vaudville dance.
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Post by Dunstan Attard on Aug 28, 2011 4:28:23 GMT -5
color, movement, reaching into a future through a past...wonderful painting i find...
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Post by Don Schaeffer on Aug 28, 2011 8:43:02 GMT -5
Thanks Dunstan--minor revision.
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Post by Ivan Carswell on Aug 31, 2011 4:11:59 GMT -5
Sort or Senryu-ish but definitely on the money!
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Post by Don Schaeffer on Aug 31, 2011 9:26:01 GMT -5
I hate to ask who that is...lol..who is it? Thanks Ivan
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Post by Ivan Carswell on Aug 31, 2011 23:07:05 GMT -5
senryu (sĕnrçû'), a Japanese poem structurally similar to the haiku but primarily concerned with human nature. It is usually humorous or satiric. Used loosely, the term means a poem similar to the haiku that does not meet the criteria for haiku Read more: www.answers.com/topic/senryu#ixzz1WfcrysjF
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Post by Don Schaeffer on Sept 2, 2011 11:26:14 GMT -5
Thanks Ivan
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