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Post by Dunstan Attard on Jul 4, 2007 12:44:47 GMT -5
you begin under the music with a smile transfixing stare hips searching subtle space satin slides piece by piece like silent noons revealing rays of dazzling light slicing into the dark recess of a wholesome forest with the scented precision of unresolved loves. and yet Aurora your confident display moved me not until a final piece, your smile, drops without warning, unraveling a moment of timid apprehension through your daunted eyes it was at this point Aurora that my vulnerability bolted with the abandon of relief, considering love, yet still not seeing the point
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Post by Shell on Jul 4, 2007 18:58:38 GMT -5
I adore this Dunstan! I wrote a similar strip-poem but with language, though I'm not sure I dare post it here ... but actually I think they might be a pair ... with yours being the better ... lol
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Post by robertrwoods on Jul 4, 2007 23:21:03 GMT -5
Very potent sound, rhythm... stripping away that which covers us up both physically or spiritually. Desire and love not always the same feeling... can be confusing, which is which?
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