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Jun 21, 2007 22:04:36 GMT -5
Post by Dimitris P. Kraniotis on Jun 21, 2007 22:04:36 GMT -5
The fireplace was eager to put a fullstop, in the sentence where the road of my dreams stuck upon the word of happiness with sparkles of wet logs I collected from the inside of me that I dared to turn to ashes.
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Jul 4, 2007 11:36:56 GMT -5
Post by robertrwoods on Jul 4, 2007 11:36:56 GMT -5
Totally satisfying this piece, Dimitris. Yes, the thought is clean and confused at the same time, but the rhythm, the color of your phrasing sparkles the most to me. This is a lovely dark thought that you weave. Sacrifice and redemption. Solid.
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Sept 10, 2008 5:44:08 GMT -5
Post by scriptamanent on Sept 10, 2008 5:44:08 GMT -5
should we remove this code thing here? it's probably Greek or some other language..
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Sept 10, 2008 5:44:41 GMT -5
Post by scriptamanent on Sept 10, 2008 5:44:41 GMT -5
είναι Ελληνικά; let's see...
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Sept 10, 2008 5:45:31 GMT -5
Post by scriptamanent on Sept 10, 2008 5:45:31 GMT -5
no it's not Greek... so what is it? anyway. and this is a very good poem Dimitris..
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Sept 10, 2008 23:22:27 GMT -5
Post by Bernard Alain on Sept 10, 2008 23:22:27 GMT -5
thanks Nicoletta, I have removed it, there are a few others I have to clean up as well.
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