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Post by Don Schaeffer on Jul 6, 2007 0:49:55 GMT -5
She wears a yellow t-shirt just like the rest of the group, watched by a guardian with an I'm-the-serious-one-around-here look.
She is laughing too much at peek-a-boo games; but when she stops, mouth loses its smile, lips slightly part and eyes narrow it brings out the woman.
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Post by Dunstan Attard on Jul 25, 2007 10:32:46 GMT -5
keen observation powerful opinion keen/powerful a reflection of the quality of this write, words that carry experience from somewhere so deep and with it i suspect soul/mind relief... always enjoy your works that are mostly a mirror reflection from inner depths
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Post by Bobby Slais on Jul 26, 2007 5:36:52 GMT -5
I could interpret the last bits a couple different ways, this one definitely makes the reader stop and think, great read Don, interesting.
Bobby
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Post by Don Schaeffer on Jul 31, 2007 22:48:06 GMT -5
Thanks guys.I really appreciate it.
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