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Post by Bernard Alain on Oct 17, 2010 11:50:46 GMT -5
and he said she was a bookreading freewheeling tart with an occassional fetish for weekend meter checks a tease for adolescent woodies an NJ swinger; in hot pursuit of bon jovi look-a-likes orgasms in a shot glass
and she sure (he) was the victim of circumstance; a small diamond left between the crack; overlooked by the monicles of more discerning cuts
and sympathy poured out steadily to sweeten the oats of old lumpy thick and syrupy shoulda-woulda-couldas coating the mush of overcooked grain and jagged edges and like a suicidal die-hard she wore old lumpy wisdom like a tnt belt, finger near the [smithereens] button; ready to obliterate anihilate eradicate lumpy or nothing lumpy or else
and today no different from the others as they yap incessantly like allies in the dmz comparing notes on whatever cowlicks and ironed curls mating with ooh ooh oohs and yeah yeah yeahs small wars forgiven for another truce in yup-amity
and I never in view long enough for real consideration but visible enough for dimissal a UFO in the no fly zone the target of heat-seeking missiles and prolonged monitoring another insignificant moment of brightness destined for tracking by circular low-luster scope
and she'll never know what he says when she's not around he'll never remember the last jab
myself I'll never risk exposing the real blips here in the dmz
anything too dubious gets shot down long
before it has a chance to drop
a bomb
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Post by Don Schaeffer on Oct 19, 2010 11:32:46 GMT -5
Very beat! And a french-lierate beat. Very high culture slumming in grit. Neat piece.
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Post by Bernard Alain on Oct 23, 2010 21:12:14 GMT -5
thanks don, have written very much poetry lately, too tied up these days, glad you liked this though, puts me in the mood to write another
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Post by Dunstan Attard on Jan 2, 2011 10:09:27 GMT -5
i missed this before now. so many layers that gel comfortably with the natural poise of naked cliffs ...good poetry indeed here that is very agreeable to my taste buds...
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Post by Joy Leftow on May 23, 2011 9:49:02 GMT -5
Wow -
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