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Post by Ivan Carswell on Apr 16, 2011 4:36:37 GMT -5
A lunch to break your heart with gladness that could also save a life – if you’ve a life in mind you’d like to try to take a chance and save!
Of course it’s mine, no need elaborate on who or why, I made a choice preferring I’d survive less age foretelling when or how my fate befell
And so my lunch today was well endowed with vagaries of happy times, coffee made the proper way, an apple sliced with splash of lime
It filled a space refined by sandwiches and lukewarm cups of tea which years of vapid conversation had so neatly nearly sublimated
Glad to say I am alive again; I knew it in a glance when I surveyed the pace with which I’d made the proper moves to break away ... © 16 April 2011, I. D. Carswell
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Post by leecrowell on Apr 18, 2011 22:05:06 GMT -5
...and you didn't have to pinch yourself
Glad you're here too Ivan. I like this one!
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Post by Dunstan Attard on Apr 18, 2011 23:52:20 GMT -5
this is my second reading and i could immerse myself in the flow of her layers of petals that bloom into a fine rose...
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Post by Ivan Carswell on Apr 19, 2011 17:08:42 GMT -5
Aw, thanks guys - I'd invite you to lunch too but one apple doesn't go very far!
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