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Post by Bobby Slais on Jul 17, 2007 21:05:54 GMT -5
Wow, what a delicious read Dunstan!!
The opening certainly got my attention, vivid and the line "Scent Of Ice" is pure genius!
Talking about a good line,
WOW! now that's good!
Then, the whole ending bit just sent me there buddy. I am a big fan of your work and this one is impressive. The romance and metaphor really work for me in this piece. ENJOYED, thank you!!
Smiles! Bobby
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Post by Dunstan Attard on Jul 18, 2007 11:58:23 GMT -5
many thanks brother in poetry, sharing is always the peak of experience, your joy is my reciprocal joy even as i read your carefully structured words in your own poetry that build emotion towards the infinity of our respective souls...
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