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Post by Dunstan Attard on Jun 12, 2007 23:18:03 GMT -5
Yesterday
What do I recall of yesterday?
Sunrise from the terrace Perfect still
Good day at the office New contract endorsed
Ate salmon and salad...
And tasted the strife That moved a suicide bomber To offer her life
That was yesterday...
So much I have taken for granted
For example Yesterday You sculptured a lake And caused the colour of wheat [/size]
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Post by Bernard Alain on Jun 18, 2007 19:07:54 GMT -5
It is an excellent book Dunstan, I still read it from time to time, this particular write seeks peace in natural beauty, blossoming into a superb intrusion of imagery in the close. A very satisfying read.
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Post by Bobby Slais on Jul 22, 2007 19:50:33 GMT -5
I really liked the contrast of the last strophe compared to the rest of the piece, really made me think and I love where it took me. Nice little narrative gem, thanks!
Smiles! BDoo
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