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Post by Bobby Slais on Jul 14, 2007 7:05:07 GMT -5
Ever curving in the way you grow, like dew soaked blades of grass in the morning glistening heavy on your tips, the sunrays strike a million diamonds, sparkling to be noticed.
Ever swerving in the way you glow, like that misty fog hiding from the light, swaying fingers reaching out for me to touch the bright reflections on your body.
Ever greedy in the way you take, your buds pull in my moistness like a flower in bloom unfurling each petal, your skin, warm shades of beauty that entice me to feel.
Ever needy in the love you make, grasping each essence I can provide like roots to nourish this growth of bodies in touch, now married to the elements nature provided.
If ever there was the day, it is here right now. We were taken inside, held, and dreamed upon as the sunrise bursts into the yearning sky. A new day begins and yesterday forgotten forever.
Bobby 2oo6/o7
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Post by robertrwoods on Jul 15, 2007 13:07:46 GMT -5
Elegant piece, Bobby. The very contemporary view of love and nature fit in a classic structure. Lots of yearning in this piece. A delight soothing piece to read. Your romantic side is one I would love to see more of.
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Post by Shell on Jul 29, 2007 6:15:10 GMT -5
What a wonderful seductive rhythm this has. Abundant sensuality and celebration here along with classic romance. *reaches for air con*
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Post by Bobby Slais on Jul 31, 2007 18:14:02 GMT -5
Thanks my friends! I wrote this for someone but also tried to make it decent to read also. Romantic and erotic poetry is most difficult to do successfully. I'll keep trying though, it's a good challenge. Thanks for the visit!
Smiles! Bobby
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