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limbo
Jul 4, 2007 12:41:15 GMT -5
Post by Dunstan Attard on Jul 4, 2007 12:41:15 GMT -5
hi bobby, thanks for sharing ...especially the link between phonetics and thought...i think im nearly there with this...only seeking a better ending possibly deleting the word for...may give it some further thought...
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limbo
Jul 3, 2007 14:54:11 GMT -5
Post by Dunstan Attard on Jul 3, 2007 14:54:11 GMT -5
limbo less invented by the instinct of a larva licensed to exist among the sentiment of our ordinary oasis surrounded by burning sands of mortal time inviting us to rise beyond faint sunsets onto a ceaseless calm of quiet stealth; soon the oasis will officially become less perpetual
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Post by Dunstan Attard on Jul 2, 2007 16:03:42 GMT -5
limbo
limbo less invented by the instinct of a larva licensed to exist among the sentiment of our ordinary oasis surrounded by burning sands of mortal time inviting us to rise beyond faint sunsets onto a ceaseless calm of quiet stealth; for soon the oasis will officially become less perpetual
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Post by Dunstan Attard on Jul 1, 2007 6:07:58 GMT -5
contrast between the singular and infinite expands onto a human heart that feels the fresh breath of freedom temporarily encapsiled in this poem...great work u r doing on this site my friend ...am still having some problem to post...this is my latest quicky poem you may want to post...peace in love
a blind child has warned us through her mean smile that limbo has become less invented by the instinct of a larva licensed to exist among the shapeless sentiment of our ordinary oasis surrounded by the burning sands of our swelling time inviting us to rise beyond faint determination onto a ceaseless calm of quiet stealth; for the blind child has also let it be known that the oasis has officially become less perpetual
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